DeepL Wirte

DeepL翻訳からの続き

ニューラル機械翻訳ツールのDeepL翻訳にはずいぶんお世話になっている。無料版だと5000字までの英文は一括で翻訳できるので，ちょっとした記事はたいていDeepLにかけている。DeepLがダウンロードを奨めてきたので，最近は，ダウンロードしたmacOS版のアプリケーションを立ち上げるようにした。

重要な文書の場合は，確認しないとときどき抜けやエラーがあるとはいえ，昔のgoogle翻訳などに比べれば圧倒的に自然な訳文がでてくる。難をいえば，29言語に対応しながら韓国語が含まれていないことだ（*）。そんなときは，これも優秀なPapago（Naver）を使えばよい。

本ブログのイントロを英訳してみたけれど，3年前より大分良くなったような気がする。

It has been 100 years since Ryunosuke Akutagawa published "The Spider's Thread. In the fall festival of my senior year of high school, the theme of our class costume parade was "The Spider's Thread. I cut out a piece of bamboo from the neighborhood for the Buddha's Paradise Tower and painted a picture of the flames and smoke of hell. It was the time when I was a hell wraith following Kandata and swarming around the spider's thread (the red rope of the mountain climbing club).

さて，そのDeepLが最近，DeepL Writeという文章校正（改善）ツールを出して話題になっている。今のところ，英語（イギリス），英語（アメリカ），ドイツ語のみの対応だ。これも早速試してみよう。

大阪教育大学のホームページの英語版の冒頭の紹介文を例にとってみた。

原文：

Osaka Kyoiku University (OKU), which was founded in May 1874 as a teacher training school, boasts over 140 years history and tradition. The current number of undergraduate and graduate students totals approximately 4,400, with another over 5,000 students matriculated in affiliated schools. Among Japanese universities, OKU is a one of the leading producers of qualified teachers and a leading large-scale college of education.

　The main campus of OKU was established in the Kongo Ikoma Kisen National Park, in Kashiwara City, Osaka. This campus is approximately 670,000 square meters in area. In addition, OKU also has a campus in Tennoji, in central Osaka.

　The university’s programs are designed to meet the high educational standards of a comprehensive teacher training university. OKU is made up 11 affiliated schools, including primary, secondary, and special needs education that are located in three areas of metropolitan Osaka: Tennoji, Hirano, and Ikeda city.

DeepL Writeによる改善：英語（アメリカ）

Osaka Kyoiku University (OKU), founded in May 1874 as a teacher training college, has over 140 years of history and tradition. The current number of undergraduate and graduate students is approximately 4,400, with more than 5,000 students enrolled in affiliated schools. Among Japanese universities, OKU is one of the leading producers of qualified teachers and a leading large-scale college of education.

　OKU's main campus was established in the Kongo Ikoma Kisen National Park in Kashiwara City, Osaka. This campus covers an area of approximately 670,000 square meters. OKU also has a campus in Tennoji, in the center of Osaka.

　The university's programs are designed to meet the high educational standards of a comprehensive teacher training university. OKU consists of 11 affiliated schools, including elementary, secondary, and special education, located in three areas of the Osaka metropolitan area: Tennoji, Hirano, and Ikeda City.

(1) 1行目のteacher training school は師範学校のことなので，colledgeでなくてもよい。

(2) 附属学校の収容定員が5000人が，matriculateになっていたが，これはenrolledが妥当か。

(3) 大阪の中央部が，in central Osaka から in the center of Osakaに。

(4) primary school がelementary schoolに。

(5) 大阪都市圏が，metropolitan Osaka から the Osaka metropolitan area に。

図：DeepLのロゴ（DeepLから引用）

*注：1/27/2023 DeepLは韓国語に対応した。31言語とはどれのことかな？（イタリア語，インドネシア語，ウクライナ語，エストニア語，オランダ語，ギリシャ語，スウェーデン語，スペイン語，スロバキア語，スロベニア語，チェコ語，デンマーク語，ドイツ語，トルコ語，ノルウェー語，ハンガリー語，フィンランド語，フランス語，ブルガリア語，ポーランド語，ポルトガル語，ラトビア語，リトアニア語，ルーマニア語，ロシア語，英語，韓国語，中国語，日本語）